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lilmami369
03-08-2007, 01:28 PM
SMACKED,-WITH-FAIR-INDICATION that Lilmami's the 'Illest Rated'(Illustrated) with the process or ACT-OF-CLARIFICATION !!
Lilmami'll put the TOASTER-TO-YA-DOME, and BLOW-YA-WITH-THE-CHROME or I might put the 'Razor to ya Face' like a MOTOROLA-PHONE !!
Have you ROLLING-OVA-IN-HOPE, that I don't leave this DUDE'S-BODY-IN-DRY-SAND, when I 'drop this Beach Sea' (***** C) like the TSUNAMI-IN-THAILAND !!
TRIM-FAGGOTS,-UR-FACE-DISTORTED, 'til I can't 'See Em' (C M) like KIM-MATHERS-WITH-RESTRAINING-ORDERS !!
I guess I'll let it go here and stop PLAYING-WITH-THIS-GIMMICK, SLAY-HIM-WITH-THE-WRITTENS, cuz the only time 'C Mass Came Heavy'(Sea Mass) was WEIGHING-THE-PACIFIC !!!!

LilMissJelly03
03-09-2007, 08:49 AM
wut up chicka keep up the rhymes gurl so when are we gonna chill and drink some whiskey with me?

lilmami369
03-09-2007, 08:50 AM
hell yeah thats y we is leavin school in like 2 hours we gettin drunk but i cant drink a whole lot tho much love chicka

Dago
03-09-2007, 09:13 AM
Tht's good work.
I have noticed that you direct your rps at a singular person. I think that in Mo you could try to brake away from the battle rhyme style of writing slightly
If you can direct it in the conditional verb ways and 'Imma do' and 'them' and examples like 'I did' & 'have done'.
High ratings nevertheless.

lilmami369
03-12-2007, 07:59 AM
well thatnx 4 lettin me know i dont ever try 2 direct them at any1 but when im pissed i just right and dont pay attention 2 what comes out but ill try not 2 direct them at any 1

Dago
03-12-2007, 01:30 PM
who am I to judge.