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    Default My first freestyle

    oh... its dirty little chucky, coming to play with the Gs,
    now put on a skirt and make me some tea,
    while this is blazzing out my speaker, know my lyrics are key,
    ,to cut down ya whole family tree,
    , now i knew this would happen with my freestyle rapping,
    heres your ride back home, now ... your recappin,
    you better start runnin ... before i start snappin,
    everybody clapping , to the raw shit i spit , get on my dick.. is what i wisper at yo chick,
    cant you see its dirty x X x plicit !

    :bigclap:

    english is my second language.. first one is dutch
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    "everybody clapping , to the raw shit i spit , get on my dick.. is what i wisper at yo chick,"

    if u whispered that line to my chick she'd slap u in your mouth! i hope

    i really liked ur flow on this, a lot of newcomers have no structure whatsoever to their lyrics but u did and it was nice, good rhymes too for ur second language, i couldn't do that
    keep it up!
    Jahrama - Ill$tyle Ikonz




    "Finally, be strong in the Lord and in his mighty power. Put on the full armor of God so that you can take your stand against the devils schemes.

    For God has not given us a spirit of fear and timidity, but of power, love and self-discipline.

    Forget about what happened long ago! Don't think about the past. I am creating something new. There it is! Do you see it?"

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    Nice explicit.. Keep it up cus you will improve more and more the more you practise
    "I mentioned to him (Kastro) about Makaveli Board and he said that Makaveli Board is family to him"

    I can't keep worrying bout the things in my life I can change
    Dear Lord give me the strength to fight the evil in this game
    Ooh I close my eyes and get down on my knees
    Pray to the heavens protect my family
    If I leave that's good enough for me

    -Big K.R.I.T- Good Enough

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    Explicit back the f.uck up and get ready for "aKK-Shun",
    call me a mutha****in thriller cuz my "Mic'll Jack Son"..
    and this "attacks fun" ya weak rhymes "lack attr-action"
    My rhymes'll burn - youll get scorched "for real",
    ill leave ya whitey tighties "soiled n filled"
    rest assured homeboy this anacondas "coils'll kill",
    ya first freestyle and ya already look "broken n ill"
    so ima cap ya f.uckin flow like BP "oil spills"..
    so to hell with your "tea", ill spell this shit out to the "T",
    lego my eggo biitch u belgians aint "f.uckin wit me"





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    8/9/82 - 6/10/11

    [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hDUeQ7hElpY"]YouTube - ‪Chuck Dirty - Memorial Day‬‏[/ame]

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    u don't want it with Ex, aint u heard, hes no saint
    as i admire the avatar C made on MS Paint
    chucks like bulimic girls, ur words "carry no weight "
    its sad, this kids still reppin awards he got in 0 8
    ur rhymes are weak, tryna rap about current affairs
    but ull never reach the top like an endless set of stairs
    Chuck Dirty the fake Chuck D, I leave u to drop-and-bleed
    trying to break balls but ill break urs to ensure ur not-to-breed
    thats quite a claim saying ur rhymes dont lack attraction
    $100 bills and a mask is the only way this cat gets any action
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    Jahrama - Ill$tyle Ikonz




    "Finally, be strong in the Lord and in his mighty power. Put on the full armor of God so that you can take your stand against the devils schemes.

    For God has not given us a spirit of fear and timidity, but of power, love and self-discipline.

    Forget about what happened long ago! Don't think about the past. I am creating something new. There it is! Do you see it?"

    The Word

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jahrama View Post
    u don't want it with Ex, aint u heard, hes no saint
    as i admire the avatar C made on MS Paint
    chucks like bulimic girls, ur words "carry no weight "
    its sad, this kids still reppin awards he got in 0 8
    ur rhymes are weak, tryna rap about current affairs
    but ull never reach the top like an endless set of stairs
    Chuck Dirty the fake Chuck D, I leave u to drop-and-bleed
    trying to break balls but ill break urs to ensure ur not-to-breed
    thats quite a claim saying ur rhymes dont lack attraction
    $100 bills and a mask is the only way this cat gets any action
    oh shit, shit just got real.


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    haha awsome

    call me a mutha****in thriller cuz my "Mic'll Jack Son"..


    trying to break balls but ill break urs to ensure ur not-to-breed
    thats quite a claim saying ur rhymes dont lack attraction
    $100 bills and a mask is the only way this cat gets any action
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    Yeah i read your little text and it was weak.
    everybody knows i am the best, i am a beast.
    the whole forum knows your a cheat
    stop using ya dictionary to speak,
    face me man.. i am right ****in here ,
    what ya mean **** with me ? are you a queer ?
    put you under the dirt and let the bad bugs bite ya ,know that i'm a West Coast ridah , fightha.. dont stand too near cauze i'mma lyricly snipe ya,
    my ryhms are tighter , i'm a ****in tiger! and your a little pussy,
    soon as I walk you around,
    kids call ya a wussy biter , i never liked ya
    dont you know its over ?! , you'r a late fake , now your shaking in you tutu cause you'r afraid,
    imma snap yo neck in halve... checkmate
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    Hope its a jahrama and chuck final that will be tight
    "I mentioned to him (Kastro) about Makaveli Board and he said that Makaveli Board is family to him"

    I can't keep worrying bout the things in my life I can change
    Dear Lord give me the strength to fight the evil in this game
    Ooh I close my eyes and get down on my knees
    Pray to the heavens protect my family
    If I leave that's good enough for me

    -Big K.R.I.T- Good Enough

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    looky here explicit i hope this shit is a joke, cuz u know ur spit aint "better than mine"
    matter of fact ur the joke like a drop from "kevin federline",
    u get ya jollies off starin at a "veteran's rhymes",
    ex ya shits elementary - i can tell ur hooked on "phonics",
    muthaf.ucka ya lyrics wouldnt slam if u were surrounded by "onyx"
    this dude is a "comic" aint even old enough to drink so he spends happy hour at "sonic"
    so ima say this right now **** you and ya "life",
    my mottos fuuck a biitch so im screwin ya "wife"
    an no matter how u invent ya imaginary life,
    belgians aint "gutta" the only time ur "butta" is when ya spread with a "knife",
    so yo i borrowed onealiens rifle and im "sighting the scope"..
    got u in the cross hairs ya see i "frighten this mope",
    but reality is ur hangin yaself ill just "tighten the rope"
    so before i "leave" ima tell ya ur not a "beast" ur a "sheep" in "wolf clothes"
    as lethal as lil red riding hood with your "flows"
    ill put this baby gangsta to sleep- fake "tony soprano"
    this verse is like my dick.. long and sick.. just "harder 2 swallow"
    drop quick and flow fast as "apollo"
    ill leave this kid decapitated... "SLEEPY HOLLOW"

    shiva theres another drake style punch 4 ya lol





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    8/9/82 - 6/10/11

    [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hDUeQ7hElpY"]YouTube - ‪Chuck Dirty - Memorial Day‬‏[/ame]

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    some call me a dutch master,
    real lyrical blaster, call me abebe bikila, but I run faster,
    differnce?
    your a run away father,
    smack you upside the head harder,
    i broke the finish line, you just a starter ,
    AAight.. Aaight..
    now lets turn it up a notch,
    while sippin on my scotch on the rocks,
    now imma let the ryhms run, now we done with the fun,
    like a king i got troops to chose from,
    50 million soldiers who take notes to every move i do son ,
    change the government and **** em up its time for a revolution ,
    my enemies sweatin n shakin in there boots hun ,
    Killuminati is what I scream at the top of my lungs !
    its time for payback for everything they've done,
    pass the gat and and schoot those motha****in c*nts,
    now you stunned, scoop the fakeness out of ya soul, but you aint got one
    like he said; hand on the bible I swear to defend my crown,
    I've been around since forever and never let it touch the ground... thats big pun
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    Explicit dutch master drops two-verses that are good for a laugh /
    after this you'll need two-herses cos i'll cut you in half /
    says hes sippin scotch on the rocks, well it makes the slur-u-write-wack /
    battlin me's like a 10 on 1, its absurd-to-fight-back /
    i'll switch this shyt, make life hell for this fish /
    this kids so broke, ive seen him 3 times on 'Make a Wish' /
    talkin about change the government, hiding behind monitor-screens /
    screamin killuminati but you dont know what that moniker-means /
    these rhymes are cold, leave you 60 degrees and 6 feet below /
    he cud get Aqua to ghost write his shit and it still wouldn't flow /
    Jahrama - Ill$tyle Ikonz




    "Finally, be strong in the Lord and in his mighty power. Put on the full armor of God so that you can take your stand against the devils schemes.

    For God has not given us a spirit of fear and timidity, but of power, love and self-discipline.

    Forget about what happened long ago! Don't think about the past. I am creating something new. There it is! Do you see it?"

    The Word

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    this kids so broke, ive seen him 3 times on 'Make a Wish' /
    funny



    you wack for trying to diss me back that makes you a b*tch/
    you sucked so much dick for pennies your rich/
    trying to come at me with smart ass ryhms/
    go to bed kid its far past your bedtime/
    tried to be nice but ya keep coming back for more/
    you like a two dollar whore who keeps knockin at my door/
    i said no! your mood says happy, what for ? you found a cheap ass shoe store ?/
    how many dicks can your pussy take/
    i saw you in NY getting down with the whole gay pride parade./
    just be real, dont be fake, we all know, every night your getting butt raped/
    Last edited by Smokey; 07-31-2010 at 04:20 PM.

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