User Tag List

Results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: Freestyle

  1. #1
    New Member
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    17
    Than/ks (Given)
    0
    Than/ks (Received)
    0
    Likes (Given)
    0
    Likes (Received)
    0
    Dislikes (Given)
    0
    Dislikes (Received)
    0
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default Freestyle

    Perhaps I got addicted to hearin my victims screamin/
    Everyday is a curse-day, product of cursed semen/
    It's time like this that make me question how we live/
    I've been cursed since my birthday, since my days of an adolescence/
    And me, I'm doing cool working shifts and going to night school/
    But still I reminisce to the days of our time in high school/
    I look back at the days where I was too poor to afford shit/
    Even as 2 culprits, you helped me pick up those Jordans/
    But now you're in the pen, full of guesses/
    Who would have guessed at your adolescence that you'd be stressing/
    Too many murders, since birth it's been a big-fear/
    Sheddin' big-tears, another ghetto child died and we was tight for years/
    The nightmare is clear, but what am I to say/
    I go up to the parents, tell em to hold strong and have fate/

  2. #2
    Moderator
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Posts
    3,876
    Than/ks (Given)
    83
    Than/ks (Received)
    196
    Likes (Given)
    200
    Likes (Received)
    295
    Dislikes (Given)
    3
    Dislikes (Received)
    2
    Mentioned
    173 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default

    Good, love your multi's and smart rhyming,

    "But now you're in the pen, full of guesses/
    Who would have guessed at your adolescence that you'd be stressing/
    Too many murders, since birth it's been a big-fear/
    Sheddin' big-tears, another ghetto child died and we was tight for years/"

    Fave lines...@StrivingStardom

  3. #3
    known as explicit Smokey's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Posts
    3,668
    Than/ks (Given)
    547
    Than/ks (Received)
    535
    Likes (Given)
    439
    Likes (Received)
    758
    Dislikes (Given)
    0
    Dislikes (Received)
    1
    Mentioned
    124 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default

    first line is very similair to better days

  4. #4
    New Member
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    17
    Than/ks (Given)
    0
    Than/ks (Received)
    0
    Likes (Given)
    0
    Likes (Received)
    0
    Dislikes (Given)
    0
    Dislikes (Received)
    0
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default

    yeh I got the idea from that song. Had soooo much emotion into it. I listen to Pac a-lot and that's where my thoughts come from u knw? like for example "Ghetto Child, Thug Lord, etc" when I mix stuff like that into my rhymes, it flows GREAT. You know? He just did everything perfect.

  5. #5
    known as explicit Smokey's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Posts
    3,668
    Than/ks (Given)
    547
    Than/ks (Received)
    535
    Likes (Given)
    439
    Likes (Received)
    758
    Dislikes (Given)
    0
    Dislikes (Received)
    1
    Mentioned
    124 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default

    actualy your ryhms are really pac like..some are pac's lines erhm..

  6. #6
    New Member
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    17
    Than/ks (Given)
    0
    Than/ks (Received)
    0
    Likes (Given)
    0
    Likes (Received)
    0
    Dislikes (Given)
    0
    Dislikes (Received)
    0
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default

    i think like him - write like him. haha his lines open my eyes sooo much though I'll post other ones so u understand.

  7. #7
    Forever Eternal Premo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2011
    Location
    East Coast
    Posts
    3,695
    Than/ks (Given)
    228
    Than/ks (Received)
    221
    Likes (Given)
    1032
    Likes (Received)
    466
    Dislikes (Given)
    21
    Dislikes (Received)
    2
    Mentioned
    136 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default

    The first part "Perhaps I got addicted to" reminded me of Until The End Of Time. But yeah, I agree, it's very Pac-like, but I like it. Keep it up!

  8. #8
    Moderator
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Posts
    3,876
    Than/ks (Given)
    83
    Than/ks (Received)
    196
    Likes (Given)
    200
    Likes (Received)
    295
    Dislikes (Given)
    3
    Dislikes (Received)
    2
    Mentioned
    173 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default

    I agree too, it's very Pac like,

    But now you're in the pen, full of guesses/
    Who would have guessed at your adolescence that you'd be stressing/

    kinda reminds me of White Man'z World for some reason

  9. #9
    New Member
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    17
    Than/ks (Given)
    0
    Than/ks (Received)
    0
    Likes (Given)
    0
    Likes (Received)
    0
    Dislikes (Given)
    0
    Dislikes (Received)
    0
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    Default

    I never listened to White Man'z World but I'll be sure to blast it off when I get some time.

    And Until The End Of Time is personally, my favorite song. The lyrics are so inspiring, favorite lines in that song:

    "Perhaps I was addicted to the dark side/Somewhere inside my childhood I missed my heart die/And even tho we both came from the same places, the money and the fame made us all change places"

    "On quiet times disappear listen to the ocean, smoking ports, think my thoughts then it's back to coasting"

    "Who can I trust in this cold world, my phony homie had a baby by my own girl/But I'm a player so I ain't sweating him, I sex his sister had her mo-good like a Mexican, his next of kin/No remorse it was meant to happen, besides rapping only thing I did good was scrappin/"

    Amazing.

Similar Threads

  1. All eminem songs (1988-2010)
    By C-Matic in forum Discussions
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 10-16-2011, 11:41 AM
  2. Replies: 0
    Last Post: 07-16-2007, 03:09 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •