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    Default Love/Hate Relationship (In 16 Lines)

    I wish for poverty to not be a problem anymore,
    I find that if guys can lobby for money, I'll be runnin' for the polls
    I'll go wild, figure I'll pull the trigger on some kids,
    I'll dig his grave after I showed him how to behave, may he rest in dead,
    I got goals, but I won't rob for the clothes or hoes,
    I want to show the world that I got more to boast,
    I'll kill for jewels, pillage fools for their dough,
    I'll instill a vile bile to childs who won't show me the gold,
    I want peace on the streets, and deceased rates to drop,
    I bleed for the scene and need to create jobs for the block,
    I'll keep silent, but please don't believe I like being quiet,
    I'll rightly become violent, tryin' to fight each guy who's smilin',
    I want charity to become more relevant for the youth,
    I want crews helping little children who can't even afford some soup,
    I'll send venom in parents 'cause it's apparent I need greed,
    I'll render 'em dealt with randomly, send 'em to hell with the rest of their family.

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    that was fu*kin' epic dude, respect! keep up the good work bro, loved it. felt like some pretty twisted emotions, hating and loving at the same time.
    And at home we treat our refugees like criminals,
    Detention centres just a catch phrase for a minimal
    Security prison, we drive gold trimmed cars,
    Down the road an Afghani kid grows up behind bars,
    And we wonder why they hate the west,
    When we treat them like they're second-class citizens at best,
    We're all pawns in a game, the USA's miniatures,
    Aussie foreign policy with George Bush's signature,

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    Really really good bro

    Such a clever set up to, each line is a statement in itself

    I enjoyed the read

    Emotive piece
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    For God has not given us a spirit of fear and timidity, but of power, love and self-discipline.

    Forget about what happened long ago! Don't think about the past. I am creating something new. There it is! Do you see it?"

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