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    Sometimes the thoughts in my head are dark and sickening
    blistered and twisted, I resisted but now its quickening
    I try to think happy thoughts but instead
    it seems like I'm a stranger in my own fucking head
    and sleep dont seem to help cos I all I do have nightmares
    of the man I used to be so I feign emotion and act like I care
    and hope I smile in the right places, and in the aftemath I laugh
    cos lack of feelings got me feeling like a psycopath
    I'm sick of living, sick of giving unforgiving screams
    running through my head like unfilled dreams
    And if I die some people cry, but oh well
    at least they get to heaven, while me?, I'll burn in hell
    and I'll be laughing while they torture me and slaughter
    my last last living dreams of my daughters



    The risk of a wrong decision is preferable to the terror of indecision



    Perhaps I know best why it is man alone who laughs; he alone suffers so deeply that he had to invent laughter

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    deep, love the flow...good piece on a man's reality...reflective both on past demons, present nightmares, and future pain

    i shall follow this...

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    Those lines make me shiver a bit......

    Thnx J.

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    damn jamaal..scary poem and dark

    nonetheless beautifuly done

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    @Jamaal I just read this like 5 times I love it ..

    See you got some n*s on your side, that say they’re your friends, but in real life they your enemies. And then you got some motha-f*s that say they your enemies, but in real life they eyes is on your money. See the enemies will say they true, but in real life those n*s will be the snitches.

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    @Jamaal - Really well done man...Feel like I can relate to this so much.
    Remember, remember this lack of a conscience, when I come out. Remember this lack of mercy, when I come out, Remember this lack of compassion, when I come out.

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