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    Rose I Understand

    Ideas keep coming .... opinions appreciated...


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    Thuggin´ on a daily basis, it´s a passion, I feel you baby,
    Incomplete without your homies all around you, where have you been lately?
    I ain´t asking, cause I know, when the sun is rising behind the hills of Beverly,
    You´ll be steppin´ through the door and I´ma be glad you made back home safely.
    Thugs heart beating only for your one and only crew, it aint easy for me,
    But, how much you need that, trust me, I can clearly see.

    2.
    Baby believe me, I understand, you ain´t had that for a long time,
    The real hood knows, you ain´t did commit no damn crime,
    Being a caged, imprisoned soul, hard times laying behind my man,
    trying hard from day to day to feel some happiness again,
    strong need, enjoy your freedom, you aint to blame, we all know,
    What went down don’t ask me, ask that stupid bitch ass hoe.
    Last edited by cribby1983; 03-17-2014 at 07:01 PM. Reason: little change in last line
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Dying

    A warm and humble voice
    whispering into my ear,
    its time to leave,
    no more pain,
    no more fear.

    A voice dark as the darkest night
    but yet so noble, gently callin
    my name to the other side.
    I let loose, feels like free fallin,
    through my veins death starts crawlin.

    And still I hear my name that this voice is callin.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    For an old friend (MF).


    Back then two forgotten souls
    found one another,
    but weren´t prepared for each other,
    a love right from the start sentenced to death,
    killed by a society´s wrath.
    But we tried.
    Every day
    and every night
    we saw the pains of this world
    from the same point of view.
    Two of a kind trying to get through.

    Wanted to show to the world,
    the raw truth uncut with all its cruelty,
    But the world wasn´t ready,
    to see
    the anger and danger
    in young peoples eyes,

    now its too late and the world mourns in disguise.




    I had to re-do this one because I felt like it wasn´t good enough yet. I posted the other version in here.
    Last edited by cribby1983; 05-01-2014 at 01:09 PM.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    You thought u knew me

    A heart torn into a thousand pieces,
    and it is still beating.

    They painted my eyes black
    but I still can see every color.

    A burst soul,
    still knowing every emotion.

    They tried to silence me,
    but I am still speaking.

    They took my arms,
    but I still can hug you with my beautiful mind.

    I met the devil
    and survived.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    your poetry is dope man! good job!

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    Just a few verses that don´t belong together


    It ain´t easy
    to decease me,
    but please go ahead and
    try to tease me,
    if I start being greedy,
    u will end up looking sleazy.



    When ya all notice
    that u know this
    truth, than u
    will start spreadin ur news
    to the youth
    and they will move
    to the groove of your truth.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Back then two forgotten souls found one another,
    we weren´t prepared for each other
    a love right from the start sentenced to death,
    killed by a society´s endless wrath.
    But we tried.
    Every day and every night
    we saw the pains of this world from the same point of view.
    Two of a kind trying to make it through.

    Wanted to show to the world,
    the raw truth uncut with all its cruelty,
    but the world wasn´t ready to see
    the anger and danger in young peoples eyes,
    now its too late, the world mourns in disguise.

    This bitch is built on power struggles, vain and lies,
    no place for pure hearts, but a true word never dies
    Minds wide open, eyes filled with pride,
    We showed our kind there are more ways, no need to hide
    Many didn´t listen, but at least we tried and with
    only one soul healed a million tears were saved from being cried.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Just a little 4-liner I added to some lyrics Kasinova Tha Don has posted on his Facebook page...


    I feel the pain in your eyes, the blackness in your heart, You wanna
    get away from all the mess, I guess it´s time to try a new start/

    I can see your desire, the need of a thugs heart beatin´ along with yours,
    Be strong now classy lady, for the last time close the devil´s door´s/

    Leaving that bitch nigga, you will notice, that your life is precious, stop the hating,
    Keep your head up, woman, and prepare for life´s many treasures waiting.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Just came to my mind...


    Drop the beat, now the heat is on again,
    I know you are the pussy bitch that killed my friend/
    Why you did it, I don´t even have to ask you that,
    He talked some real shit, told everybody you´re a rat/
    You can tell the world now what´s up with that,
    go ahead
    you won´t get away, a million out, this time on your head/
    Like I said, don´t you think it was over then,
    when he took his last breath,
    you knew exactly what would happen in the aftermath./
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    If I can´t be
    who I wanna be,
    then I don´t want to be
    because if I should be
    who I don´t wanna be,
    then I´d be just some wannabe
    and that is what I don´t want to be,
    so let me be me.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    I aint mad

    So u tell me yous a real nig then I gotta ask u why/
    You playin, proly jus was being high/
    Shit the fuck you thought you was doin/
    My mindstate this was almost to ruin/
    All I told u was for real but fuck that aight/
    But hey boy I ain´t mad, Im gon be alright/
    Go play wit them bitches around the block/
    With a lil encouragement they´ll proly suck
    a lil cock, wish u the best with whatever honey /
    I ain´t gots time for shit like that, my world still sunny.

    I ain´t mad!
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Listen Ima tell u sum bout my life now, u ready? /
    Cuz shit happens even here in Germany. /
    Brenda coulda been me back then /
    only difference I didnt get pregnent. /
    But I suffered asshole took my dignity /
    didnt know where to go or who to be. /
    had to raise myself find my way /
    fuck friends nobody would let me stay /
    so I fought on my own /
    sharpened mind, I cried but I tried /
    to stay strong and Im still here which means /
    not everything went wrong.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Believe in every single word that I say.
    I do really mean it that way.
    Im the Ladybeingreal,
    u gotta deal with it,
    if I accept u within my inner circle,
    be assured I know that you´re feelin it.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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