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    Default One night of many

    1.
    No knock, a kick, door open, 20 known strangers
    conquering the house, room for room, upcoming dangers,
    No arms around, we only four, I force
    2 friends to escape through the back door.
    Don´t want ´em to leave behind a widow and kids,
    I stay strong can´t run, can´t move, if I leave this
    ain´t never be a chance to strike back, to get at they ass,
    I swear, stronger forces behind me, we´ll bring stress
    And if ya bitches even try to bring trouble back,
    I promise, we be breaking all ya fucking neck.


    2.
    Here we are, you and me facing 20 enemies,
    on a cold icy winter night, evaluating equities,
    Instead of touching me, they choose to go at you first,
    satisfying their bloody inexpressibly thirst
    Where he at, where he at, your brothers name they call,
    me screaming back, he ain´t here, now fuck ya´ll,
    I don´t fight I tell myself, can´t do shit it´s 20:2, I thinkin
    A girl and a boy ain´t got no chance to beat 20 motherfuckers on a mission.
    So I observe, every face, every move, a tall bitch bald head grabbing my throat,
    Slammin me against the wall, I just sincerely hope his last will he already wrote.


    Hook:
    Ain´t no way to break me down,
    No one´s ever gonna take me down,
    I know where my people be,
    Believe in them, believe in me,
    Just give it a try and come for me,
    We´ll show you where the heavens be.


    3.
    Bald head be tellin me to never talk, I can´t breathe
    But all I got on my mind is thank you “stupid” for just steppin up to me,
    Come on man, come closer please, so I can see your fucking face more clearly.
    We´ll meet again, I´m a girl, you missed to kill me,
    we be back, 100 deep, then you will feel who we be.
    My man on the floor, still getting beat up, with them baseball bats,
    his head getting kicked in with them boots with the steel caps,
    Suddenly sirens everywhere, them bitches start running, ducking and hide,
    They sure be celebrating they lame victory with pride.


    4.
    Blood splattered all over the back yard, my man ain´t moving no more,
    looking dead at me, he gone, bout that I´m pretty sure.
    Sirens, sirens getting louder, to my surprise, the homie still but barely breathing,
    ambulance took him to the hospital, constantly reviving.
    Next morning cops still asking questions, ain´t got nothing to say, we do it our way.
    Now it´s time to find a safe place for a little while to stay, next day,
    At the park a meeting we be having, no time to rest,
    Gotta strategize and plan the payback, the big blast.
    A year earlier, tensions already rising, they took out lil B.
    For once and for all, we show them bitches what we made of, ultimate victory.


    Hook:
    Was no way to break me down,
    You just missed to take me down,
    I knew where my people be,
    Believed in them, believed in me,
    You gave it a try and came for me,
    Too late, now you know where the heavens be.
    Last edited by cribby1983; 05-03-2014 at 04:32 PM.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Shit is fire, I read your other stuff too, you should get in the booth, that's what I might do, no need to waste the talent. I'ma drop something later on here also.
    "Every second I'm great-full
    You never know how much time
    You got left breathing
    Can die tonight or the next evening
    Live like ya mean it" -Young Noble

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    Drop a Nate Dogg hook in there and you got yourself a single.

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    I added a hook.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    little girl u need to know it aint the thing/
    to be the world champion in twerking/
    and I heard they say that u can sing/
    if it´s true there u have a thing worth trying/
    queen haven’t u recognized u are good at maths/
    u only 10, still time enough for u to follow that path/
    why u listen to these these fools who keep tellin you/
    to dance for them instead of doin that go to school/
    cuz education is cool brings acceptance and respects/
    plus u gain power by simply knowing some facts/

    at age fifteen, why are u stayin out all night/
    that don’t make sense cuz u wont find Mr. Right/
    who could save you from the gutter/
    all you gonna find is to be a young single mother/
    think about it girl but I know little lady/
    deep inside you already know all that baby/
    but please do me a favor and never forget about your self/
    you´re a little genius by nature, keep smiling, do it for yourself.
    A smile every day keeps the sadness away
    And I want to see exactly that smile in your face, forever shall it stay.
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    After trying to text battle someone:

    Yo usually I don´t reply to shit like this /
    cuz I like to go deeper talk some real topics /
    lets talk Mike what happened there I hope at least /
    it opened all ya eyes unleash the beast /
    power black, pride BROWN people wear your crown /
    this time there aint no backin down /
    no steppin back, you r young powerful and strong /
    aint nothin more that can go wrong/
    and this system is bullshit already /
    so u better now be prepared and ready/

    there's no peace, they wanna see u decease /
    wanna see rot every cell of your brains in a cell /
    until there´s no one left to fight for freedom and peace /
    gotta go against it /
    or there will never be peace /
    don´t freeze if they bring out their troops /
    scream I don´t give a fuck about you /
    put aside dis red and blue /
    man, u know what Im talkin about /
    say it loud n proud, stand as one, unbowed /



    My boyfriend added his verses:


    it's a revolution and im strapped and im ready/
    military minded blast all these bastards in the belly/
    my Girl Mary said she ready put on her boots and Fatigues/
    and strapped up and went on a ride with me/
    thats my Germany Queen if you touch her hommie ,it's a must that you bleed/
    i heard the Military was out looking for me/
    but im not hiding im out riding clutching my heat/
    fuck red fuck blue anit no colors in this/
    on souljahs ready to ride and prolly Die for this shit/
    im loaded up to the top and imma bust my shit/
    fuck the media tell all swallow a Dick/

    to the one's who was hatting on my way up/
    when i see you , you either die or it's time to pay UP/
    it dont matter white or black brown yellow or green/
    it's about that time for us to formulate a team/
    is you with me or against me cuz i promise you this/
    every one on my team is sure to exist/
    and my girl Mary Mary is a Bad ass Chick/
    dont let her pretty looks fool you she'll ride for this shit/
    im a thug ass nigga with the heart of a King/
    with a thug ass chick with the heart of a queen/
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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