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    Default ''Airplanes'' (feedback welcome!)

    Been working on this, dunno if i like it though coz i think its kinda cheesy as fuck ha
    i was listening to that Airplanes song at the time. see what you guys think though


    (spoken part) i could really use that wish right now. shit...

    fuck an introductionn, i just wanna make tunes
    when all im hearin' is ''sorry kid the booths full there just aint no room''
    got me angry as a motherfucker turning me into the incredible goon,
    anti superhero type sinister shit, got me howlin' at the moon
    coz the worlds in a mess, were just all hopless & doomed
    got me screamin thug life baby! we all growing up far too soon
    listen, im no buffoon i aint tryna come across as a loon
    i just hate this shit so take me back to the womb,
    before the shit hits the fan, explodes & goes boom

    and can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars?
    coz im always thinking dumb shit when im spittin bars.. like..
    fuck currency, fuck fake friends, fuck flash cars,
    thats all alien to me, so send me to mars!
    get me in that spaceship quick, pass the navigational charts
    coz am not likin earth no more, its just on its fuckin arse!
    and real friends, well.. their becomin' real scarce
    when people just wanna smoke the finest cigars, whilst fucking tarts
    with the prettiest of harlots money can buy runnin' round in their & bras
    buying new tits like it was just parts on a car
    the most heartless-est of bitches leaving scars
    running round collectin them jars of hearts & im tryna' remain smart but this shits hard,
    lifes an emotional bombard, when all you wanna do is spit bars
    coz women be acting like armed guards, throwin darts & drivin shards through hearts
    damn, chasing woman got me bombin' down the wings like olivier bernard,
    dreams got people seeing visions of living lavish lifestyles through prison bars,
    yeah i mean the visions outta reach, its just a stonesthrow too far
    and i dont like this shit so take me back to the start,
    forget fantasys of foreign women & fast cars,
    so on that note my final thoughts are... fuck them shooting stars
    i'll just continue to spit bars & dream from afar


    Edit - this has been switched up alot since the intial post so its been heavily changed ha.

    Final edit - its done i think ha. can i get some feedback?
    Last edited by NorthEast91; 08-27-2014 at 08:50 PM.




    Yo I like the way you think and the hate you have for these suckers lol,
    to some fans it's just music but to you I can see it means more, real fan, respect!

    I'm trigga happy and I give less than a fuck
    Love me or hate me I'mma show nough rip shit up
    It's Mr. nothin, nice on the mic stand
    Mic in the left and the zest in my right hand

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    Bump! no feedback? ive got a fucking shit ton of lyrics on my other laptop about everything & anything to put up eventually ha




    Yo I like the way you think and the hate you have for these suckers lol,
    to some fans it's just music but to you I can see it means more, real fan, respect!

    I'm trigga happy and I give less than a fuck
    Love me or hate me I'mma show nough rip shit up
    It's Mr. nothin, nice on the mic stand
    Mic in the left and the zest in my right hand

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