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    A dedication

    1.
    I am a young lil lady,
    With potential, you said,
    You saw my pain and my tears,
    Then noticed my talent.
    Took the time and read
    Every word that I wrote,
    Understood and decided,
    To help me get back on the raod.
    I had gotten off track,
    without knowing what had happened,
    vulnerable and lost,
    bout to give up, when you stepped,
    into my life
    couldn’t believe it, but this was true
    a deepn spiritual connection
    between me and you.

    2.
    A still sometimes
    Today I am asking myself
    How blessed I was back than and still I am
    That I deserved your help.
    Talked bout what exactly you saw in me,
    You said
    A rough little diamond I would be.
    And if taught the right way and given advice,
    I could make it big
    A blessing in disguise.
    Back in the day too young to yet understand,
    Why you had this view
    To fully get what you meant,
    Years it took me a few.
    Now that I know,
    all I can say is, Thank you, boo!

    3.
    When I was suicidal,
    It was only three words,
    You said “you are precious”,
    You will change the world.
    Had never heard someone
    Saying something that strong,
    Lifted me back up,
    Made me wanna move on.
    The written pieces
    You left behind for me,
    They are what I live by today,
    You see,
    These were words of wisdom
    And reality, They were truly meant to be,
    That’s why I chose to share them
    With those I feel are in need.

    4.
    Of a real true word,
    Spoken from the heart,
    You never bit your tongue,
    Rather spit some hard
    Truth into everybody’s face
    no matter what,
    Most couldn’t handle it
    They wasn’t ready for that part!
    You loved to walk the stony roads,
    Rather than going easy,
    Preferred to go hard at things,
    Instead of sounding sleazy.
    And today every night
    Im looking at the brightest star,
    In the sky, that is you,
    Living eternally, You know who you are!
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Thats dope, some deep stuff there, how long you been writing?




    Yo I like the way you think and the hate you have for these suckers lol,
    to some fans it's just music but to you I can see it means more, real fan, respect!

    I'm trigga happy and I give less than a fuck
    Love me or hate me I'mma show nough rip shit up
    It's Mr. nothin, nice on the mic stand
    Mic in the left and the zest in my right hand

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    Quote Originally Posted by NorthEast91 View Post
    Thats dope, some deep stuff there, how long you been writing?
    In general? Well I started writing poetry when I was 12.

    This piece took me 20 mins to write it down...
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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    Quote Originally Posted by cribby1983 View Post
    In general? Well I started writing poetry when I was 12.

    This piece took me 20 mins to write it down...
    Only 20 mins? Talented!




    Yo I like the way you think and the hate you have for these suckers lol,
    to some fans it's just music but to you I can see it means more, real fan, respect!

    I'm trigga happy and I give less than a fuck
    Love me or hate me I'mma show nough rip shit up
    It's Mr. nothin, nice on the mic stand
    Mic in the left and the zest in my right hand

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    Quote Originally Posted by NorthEast91 View Post
    Only 20 mins? Talented!
    maybe talented but behind this there is a real life story. and that makes it easier to write it down.

    Ive written so much within this past year, all the poetry and lyrics... but I cant show u everything cuz we are in the process of recording this shit and I dont want it out before it is actually out knoImsayin?

    But yeah together with my bf - we have written enough material for more than 3 albums ... its just amazing cuz we inspire each other, if we start a writing session, its lasts 5-6 hours sometimes, constantly writing... he is throwin out a verse, than I reply....this goes back and forth... awesome. same goes with the beat making. I make one, he adds his ideas, than sends it back to me... highly productive we are... lol
    Writing a verse every day, keeps the psychologist away.

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