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    Default Its hiphop 4 life

    it is 10 am on a saturday mornin
    radio plays as i lay snorin
    got up n skiped breakfast cuz da milks sour
    so I jam 2pac as i take a quick shower
    always dressin wit khakis n black tees
    and i bump scrface when I roll my 88' caprice
    gotta see my barber to get my texas-made taper fade
    as he cuts, i write rhymes on a paper plate
    go home n fuk it!.. i take a shower again
    then head to my shed to exercise the power of my pen
    scribble wordz as I spin illmatic
    hours later, when my comrad called, i was still at it
    he tells me to join the crew for sum cold brew
    on my way i bang nuthin but old school 'Screw'
    no beef everbody jus drinkin
    now da weeds got us thinkin
    so niggaas take turns n spit verses in a lefthanded rotation
    my crazed wordz amazed recivin a standin ovation
    but stil, sum plot to make me crumble
    so i gotta stay awake n humble
    inspred by nas pac n eminem
    but still listen to alot of method man
    u go head n listen to dilluted rap or whateva
    but i will represent true hip hop foreva...

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    i like this a lot ......im likin how you talked bout your day with hip hop and put in your favorite artist in thre like pac nas method and eminem poem caught me and i read it to the end
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    gracias..im glad u liked it

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    I'm liking that. good Job.
    my crazed wordz amazed recivin a standin ovation
    ^^^I like that line.

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    This is very good, I like it alot. You got a uneek carisma. 5 stars

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    gotta see my barber to get my texas-made taper fade
    as he cuts, i write rhymes on a paper plate
    go home n fuk it!.. i take a shower again
    then head to my shed to exercise the power of my pen


    dope lines, had a nice flow there.. maintain that multi-syllable rhyme scheme throughout and it would be crazy dope. nice piece overall.
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