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    I'm feeling the pain from anguish for my brain still maping and rapping the same
    thgough i'm older were more expoeriences from and for goals forged, once i bask in haram the debt is formed
    The toxins are a dwell in sense inhibitiors thow Ic come down with worse force thsant the previous of and come off-couse for a brief dwell in negative thoughts in wich the madness I pay a cost and beat the thoughts as a record would skip until the needle warmas and or inanimate objects ibeat with force at the gain of shock force for the tendons and more tension for the column as I would crack the bones as I'm told osteoporosis will dawn, but I must keep me in a forward and taught straight posture in direction of stillness and limber in lest man catch a vibe to stumble a part to derail the untimely method alavi and mort as autopilot takes force control over the tempered soul
    I find things I say to me i could take as your own as I write here but expose the mind and leak part of my particular if any stile of parting word in rhymy prose could evvoke some kind of entertainment maybie but this escape is for my own, as a many of page continue to others dormant in my rhyme folder and the past is gone as far as I know time is an illusion in comparison with the calculouss of linking thoughts that are yerned to be found in wishful considerence of the greater picture, but how wise is the person enough till they look frale or are gone, know thyselfe i know I have so far to go. I try to reach to me in your reflection If I wanted your gaze.

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    Wow, nice read Dago. I admire your writing in this piece, real tight.

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    Thanx main, that's one of my better ones.

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    That's deep Love How the words flow keep on writing

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